>>date: 15 June 2003
>>time: 6:14 p.m.

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Sarah,

Hey! I think that your poem is interesting. You used very descriptive words that led to pretty imagry. If you are serious about being a poet you should focus more on the meaning behind your words and less on trying to sound a certain way. Perfect form doesn't always make for a perfect poem. Poetry, good poetry that is, tells a story wrapped in metaphor and similie, using vocabulary like a paintbrush, stroke by stroke, you paint your words.

I hope it all works out for you! Good luck!

Bunny

To which she responded:

You really think so? ME TOO! I'm glad you like it! THANK YOU!!

WTF?? Did she read the wrong email? Her email addy used to pop up as "Sarah of Nine" but now she's changed it to "Lyrical Muse." For some reason I want to punch her in the face. She wants a livejournal but I keep telling her I don't have any more codes, which isn't true, but... yeah. I'm mean. She used to have a d-land diary forever ago (dibs.diaryland.com) but it's not there anymore. ::shrugs::

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